First off. Freddy, thanks a TON for the open and honest review and I appreciate all of it. I do mean ALL of it. The meaning got through.
I will definitely go back and revisit the About section on this. I do agree with you on the being able to jump in and understand the story. And since I'm not writing this as each page is seperate, like PvP online or Penny Arcade but I'm approaching it more like Freakangels, with a larger story arc. But Freakangels has a very useful and information about section that informs you on what you're reading. Will get to that change as soon as I can.
Thanks a lot for the compliments and even more so for the critiques. I can't improve without external input and the input isn't any good unless it's open and honest.